Nobody laughed

                           WALT illustrate a part from the book you chose  

Hello viewers today i recreated a scene in nobody laughed. i chose this scene because the children had to go P.E and the cleaning lady had to clean the hooks and         the cleaning lady put every bag on the ground and they got mixed up. 

                                                                         

i think this part is important because he wanted his bag to be last and the teacher was searching for other peoples bag and he was lucky his one was last but the other people want to see what was in his bag and so                    he made it fair and showed them what was in his bag and showed his own secret. 

My quality blog comment

Lost treasure

Hello viewers and today I recreated a part of the story I like in                                            lost treasure. 

              

I like this part because he had to wash the dishes when he promised to find Nanny's teaspoon and he was imagining how much fun Hoani was going to have when he had to wash the dishes. Hoani actually did not find anything there was just holes everywhere. And I think that is the most important part of the scene other wise he                              could of waste his time and not do the job.

How to make a quality comment

Hi guys! So today I am here with Kezia and today we will show you how to make a quality comment. We learnt this because 1. The teacher told us too 2. Because some people don't know how to make a good comment so that's why we step in! In order to make a quality comment you, 1. write something Positive, 2.  write Something thoughtful 3. write something helpful. Here is an example: Hello, my name is Sophie. I really like your blog post,it teaches the audience a lot. You worked really hard wiring this speech, the third paragraph is amazingly long with lots of information. Next time, maybe you could add a description telling the audience what you wrote about. Have a nice day  Here is our first task, what we did was we sorted out which was a good comment and what was a bad one.

Our learning went quite well. We now know how to make a good comment We want you guys to comet on out work and out quality work So the teachers told us to put our work into our cyber smarts folder!

have a nice day!