The Drop Of Doom

Hello viewers In this weeks writing we had to look at a picture the teacher put up and it was like a little girl falling into a dark endless hole we had to think about what the little girl can hear, taste, feel, smell, feels in emotions and see. It was really hard to plan it out in a very small picture because it does not show anything else and you also had to add a ending. It could be as creative as you want so I did something that probably no one will expect and i think you will like it. after that we had to write a couple paragraphs about our story then we got it checked and we typed it out on our Chromebook. I hope you enjoy my blog post.

Drop of doom

Elsa was a nice kid but when it comes to dares she can be EVIL. She and her sister Anna were playing I dare you, Anna won and dared Elsa to jump in a hole. “It can’t be that deep right?” Elsa said, then she jumped after a few seconds she realized how deep it was, she immediately screamed for help but it was no use she started to get a grip on the rusty wood and it ended up cutting her skin. She saw the light at the top. As it got smaller she thought she was gonna die so she closed her eyes and thought about her family, Anna and some memories in her life. Then a piece of wood hit her then she opened her eyes and a piece of book caught her attention then she looked around there it was full of books by now she thought it was a never ending drop. After 20 mins bugs started to crawl on her. It was slimy and it went up her spine and she got the chills and she slapped her own back to try to kill it. She could smell the dead creatures around her. It smelt like rotten flesh as she imagined and She could feel her heart thumping 1,000 thumps per second. She managed to catch one of the books and started reading it. It was about the knowledge of ancient times. It's been about 6 hours since she had seen grass and her sister then seconds later she landed softly and she felt like there was no gravity and there was no gravity. It was a marshmallow land and it was filled with marshmallows. She opened her mouth and marshmallows went in her mouth. It was like she was in a dream until she heard a voice in her mind and it was her sister's voice Anna. She was confused then she felt something weird, then suddenly she woke up in a not so deep hole. It was the exact same spot of the deep hole she was confused but the hoped out and they went home and it was only 3:30 just after school but in the dream it felt like hours then she promised herself to never get close to the not so deep hole again and they never, ever, EVER played I dare you again and they lived happily ever after.

 

Hopefully you enjoy this weeks writing we don't blog much writing so this is quite new anyways bye bye C: