In writing this week we did compound and I did it with Seoa and if you guys don't know well it is basically a normal sentence into a compound sentence you will see what I mean
Halloween Night
As I walked past the neighbors front yard to go say trick or treat
something gave me chills. There were way too many decorations or
maybe it was real... I wondered if this was Halloween decorations or real stuff. Pumpkins were surrounding me as I walked past the area
however they looked cute. I can smell the smell of rotten candy and melted
chocolate. I can taste the fog that went past me and I wondered where all this frog was coming from. I was thinking to
myself if going here was a good idea but I decided to stay for a bit. I was right under the giant moon and it was a pretty moon.
The trees curved over me as I touched it, it felt like soggy socks. I knew this was no good so I ran
away in the distance.
Hello Lucas, Bilal here. I really like you're Halloween night story really interesting and I guess some people may like it a lot maybe because they are a horror fanatic but you never know, anyway this is an epic blog post and may be the best in my opinion but next thing you could do is try changing the font to make it more interesting in my opinion but overall its an epic blog post
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